Save the Date wording for land wedding

Hello all ,

I'm trying to order our save the dates but have no clue how to word it. So far I only have :

Save the Date and sail with us

Jamea and Edward are tying the knot in the Caribbean

Setting sail from Jacksonville FL to cruise to Bahamas

June 8-12 , 2017

For more Information please visit our website : http://www.bahamastakeover2017.com

Please share your wording or any suggestions are appreciated. Below is the pic of the save the date I will be ordering. TIA

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Congrats Jamea and Edward, I must say it is a little challenging coming up with the wording for a land based cruise wedding. We did a magnet from Etsy, with some photos and the dates and out wedding website. We also sent a business card with the cruise info on it.

Save the Date and sail with us

"Actual wedding date"

Jamea and Edward are tying the knot

"Nassau, Bahamas"

Join us aboard the "cruise line"

Setting sail from Jacksonville FL to the Bahamas

June 8-12 , 2017

For more Information please visit our website : http://www.bahamastakeover2017.com

Were pretty much just trying to get the most information in the shortest way possible on our save the dates, however the bulk of your information will be on your website. Wish you all the best.

Hello all ,

 

I'm trying to order our save the dates but have no clue how to word it. So far I only have :

 

Save the Date and sail with us

Jamea and Edward are tying the knot in the Caribbean

 

Setting sail from Jacksonville FL to cruise to Bahamas

 

June 8-12 , 2017

 

For more Information please visit our website : http://www.bahamastakeover2017.com

 

Please share your wording or any suggestions are appreciated. Below is the pic of the save the date I will be ordering. TIA

 

 

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Keep in mind that it is just the Save the Date. It is not the invitation, so it doesn't need to have everything on it that an invitation would have.

You want to give the date AND you want to direct them to your wedding website so that they can see all the details.

If you will be sending an actual invitation, you might add this phrase: formal invitation to follow