Invitation help

[Pjsgal]

Can anyone help with wording ideas ? Embarkation wedding

 

Thanks!!!

[Carnival_Brides]

These are an edited screenshots of our embarkation invitation and RSVP. Hope they help!

[engagedonthesea]

:pBride and Groom

will set sail on life's greatest voyage

as they exchange vows aboard the Carnival Legend

Please join them for their pre-sailing wedding

on Sunday, the twenty-nineth of May

two thousand and five

at eleven in the morning

New York, New York

 

Mr and Mrs. Smith

Invite you to celebrate with the happy couple immediately following the ceremony

aboard the Carnival Legend docked at

55th and 12th Avenue

New York, New York

[Pjsgal]

Thank you sooo much for both suggestions !!!